写给高三儿子的一封信鼓励与期望，建议信写作技巧和方法

【高考英语】写作必背范文之建议信

写作必背范文之建议信

一、请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括:

1. 菜价昂贵，菜市单一;

2. 排队时间长，浪费午休时间;

3. 味道不佳，浪费现象严重。

注意:

1. 词数不少于 120;

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 食堂 canteen

Dear Principal,

Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________

I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

Yours,

Li Hua

范文: (192 字)

Dear Principal,

Recently, the problems of the canteen(食堂)have given rise to a heat discussion among the students in our school, which I think should be paid great attention. Some students think the prices of the dishes are so high that some of them even can’t afford it. And meanwhile the food choices are too limited. Another concern is that so long is the time spent in waiting that we less time to take a rest. What’s worse, some students can’t bear the awful taste of the food, leading to a lot of waste.

As far as I’m concerned, prompt actions are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. First and foremost, it’s suggested that the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various. In addition, it’s better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time.Last but equally important, making tasty dishes to reduce the food waste should be taken into account. It is advisable to hire more cooks and even nutritionists to improve the quality of food.

I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

Yours,

Li Hua

建议模板:

Dear ….,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions.

First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.

建议句型积累:

Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most effective ones.

I’d like to make some suggestions on …….

It’s of great importance for sb to do sth；It’s necessary for sb to do sth

It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if…….

It contributes /helps a lot if ………

My suggestion is that …；It’s suggested / advised / recommended that……

You’d better do sth./ We’d better do sth；It’s better to do sth

Measures are supposed to be taken to do sth；We are supposed to take effective measures to do sth

It’s high time that sb did sth. / It’s high time for sb to do sth

二、假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫 Sad Mother 的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。 请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. However I found out she failed in math and English. What should I do?

写作要点:

1. 表明了解她的问题;

2. 帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因;

3. 提出至少两条建议

要求:

1. 短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

2. 短文词数不少于 100(不含已写好的部分)。

3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

4. 书写需清晰、工整。

范文:(168字)

Dear Sad Mother,

Learning on your blog that your daughter told lies to you, which worried you a lot, I, being the peer of your daughter, would like to help you analyze the reasons behind it and offer you some practical suggestions.

To begin with, the probable reason why your daughter told a lie is that telling you the truth may well ends up with punishment. Besides, teenager students, nowadays, suffer so much pressure from their parents that they are fearful for failing to live up to their parents’ expectations. In order not to let you down, she has no choice but to lie.

Concerning your problem, here are some practical suggestions. First of all, you’d better have a heart-to-heart talk with her, helping her realize that compared with scores, honesty is much more significant. In addition, don’t be too strict with your daughter. It’s advisable that you allow her to make some minor(微小的) mistakes.

Hope my advice will be of great help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

高级词汇:

peer n. 同龄人

be strict with sb. 对某人很严格

let sb down 让某人失望

heart-to-heart 诚恳的

三、为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为 Worried 的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气，使正常 的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

内容要点如下:

1. 表示理解并给予安慰;

2. 提出建议并说明理由。

注意:

1. 词数 120 左右;

2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇:temper n. 脾气，情绪

Hi Worried，

I’ m sorry to know that you’ re having such a bad time at the moment.

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Jamie

范文(191字):

Hi Worried，

I’m sorry to know that you’re suffering such a bad time at the moment. It is widely acknowledged that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong. I quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it too much. What’s more important is to learn how to control your temper so that you may successfully avoid doing or saying anything you’ll regret. In an effort to reach the goal, the following three useful tips should be taken into account.

First of all, talk to someone you trust about the trouble you’re confronted with, which serves as a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Secondly, another effective way to get rid of anger is to do physical exercise or play team games with your close friends. Last but not least, try to remain optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life will certainly be of great benefit in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon become calmer and better.

Yours,

Jamie

高级词汇:

have a bad time 困难时刻

regret v. 后悔

remain optimistic 保持乐观

period n. 时期

physical exercise 体育锻炼

lift one’s spirits 振奋精神

control one’s temper 控制脾气

effective adj. 有效的

become calmer 变得更冷静

四、高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常 生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子， 向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:

1、劳逸结合; 2、健康饮食; 3、适当锻炼; 4、保持乐观心态。

注意:

1. 短文必须包括所列内容;

2. 词数 120 左右;

3. 文章开头已给出;

4. 写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。

范文:(155 字)

When Senior 3 is approaching, the vast majority of students are under increasingly great pressure,which exerts great influence upon their life, preventing them from sleeping well and causing health problems. Confronted with such tough situation, offering some helpful advice is of great significance.

First and foremost, combine study with rest. Keep in mind that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Furthermore, it is of vital importance to keep a healthy and balanced diet. Staying away from junk food and eating healthy food like vegetables and fish will benefit you a lot. Additionally, go outdoors and take regular exercise, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, good health means being both physically and mentally healthy.

Keeping an optimistic state of mind will contribute to a good physical state. I sincerely hope that the suggestions above will be of great help to you.

高级词汇:

the vast majority of 绝大部分的

increasingly great pressure 越来越大的压力

condition n. 状况，条件

balanced diet 均衡饮食

both physically and mentally healthy 身心健康

keep an optimistic state of mind 保持思想乐观

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明的孩子也变傻。

approach n. 接近;临近

affect v. 影响

keep in mind that… 将……牢记于心

take regular exercise 定期锻炼